Poster: Feedback

I recently presented my draft ancillary poster to my target audience of both male and female teenagers/young adults and received the following comments:

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Excellent main image, good pose

Appropriately chosen fonts

Relates well to music video

Shows narrative of travel

Professional feel

To Improve:

Change release date

Work on layout of text

Add magazine reviews

I am pleased with the feedback I received as I am not only happy with the positive comments but agree entirely with the more constructive ones. For example, the suggestion to add reviews in the form of star ratings from popular music magazines was something I had already considered, and can now add to my poster.

Furthermore, it was pointed out to me that the date I had randomly chosen to release the music video would have been in the summer. However, the connotations the poster brings, including my artist's winter clothing and the bare wintery trees suggests that it would be more appropriate to change the date to something at the end of the year. I will begin to experiment further with these changes and upload my final poster soon.